How do you explain everything to someone who’s just woken up? You info dump them telepathically of course… means the reader doesn’t have to read through it all again. Unless of course the reader is new, in which case they should go to the start of this chapter and read it all through!


Is Olga wearing glasses or goggles?
They’re kind of goggley-glasses… but she wouldn’t need them for vision so they’re really just goggles.
Is Kaycee going to voice her suspicions? It would help Olga is she had some comrades. Fatima and Kaycee are the most level headed of the second year squad. Telling them whats happened to herself would help bind their little team. Ah, just noticed that the next episode is titled ‘Olga Who?’ Nice
Since they are communicating telepathically why is Fatima’s speech pattern still broken up? Shouldn’t she be communicating normally?
In the previous sequence they were all linked in through Fatima’s subconscious and communicating in native PherNian (we saw the translated version which read as good English) – now they are out of Fatima’s subconscious and, while still communicating telepathically, it is English where Fatima is still somewhat weak.
Kacey isn’t stupid, and Olga is new to this double life thing. They didn’t have Second Life in the 60′s.
When you look at the stories so far, Kaycee and Fatima have been through a lot together. They’re developing a pretty strong bond, they work well as a team, and now Kaycee has been let in on some of Fatima’s most intimate memories. I wonder, does the Magellan program have a provision for cadets who intend to form a permanent crime-fighting duo after graduation? The Magellan team assignments we’ve heard about so far have been individual things, but it seems like there would be provisions for permanent superhero partnerships.
We get information dumped, thrown and excreted at us daily (thank you internet adds) and are never asked for permission. Why would a psychic need to ask?