Today’s update touches on a number of previous story points (I wouldn’t exactly call them sub-plots) – for example, Fatima’s curiosity with the idiom “pull up your socks” – presumably started bya statement by Redd (see page 5.11), and discussed at her cultural support group (page 5.12) and first attempted post-Lyta melt down (page 5.15). […]
Posts Tagged ‘Brelvis’
So today we shift our focus from Joe to Kaycee, Brelvis and Fatima – since we haven’t seen them for a few pages. I’m a big fan of showing characters walking around and sitting around (for some reason though I hate drawing them standing around). The walk around may not have a lot of action […]
oops… I numbered this page 5.111… but it is 5.110! I’ll fix it soonish. You may recall the teleporting 4th year cadet Padma Singh from a few pages ago. At that point of departure (page 5.103) she was due in Sydney in 10 minutes so even though it’s taken us a few weeks to see […]
Brelvis may not have much in the way of tactical skills but maybe he makes up for it with dumb heroics – perhaps not even that will save him this time. Will Joe get the chance to save the day this time? We shall see!!
Wow, I wrestled with this moment for quite a while… like several months. Anyway, I know it’s a bit of a shocker so apologies to those of you with more PG oriented sensibilities. Maybe Lonsdale should have had Grey tried up before “curing” him! So after simmering along for months now everything is moving into […]
Oh well, doesn’t look like Brelvis has a plan after all! At least he’s trying… Malice of course is still tied up from when Kaycee decked her with that electro net. Annnyway, things start to pick up from here on in and with that in mind there will be more updates forthcoming, with another one […]
The Gen-Ex party is on their way back to Oz Magellan HQ – and they’re flying in style. It was mentioned earlier (page 5.29) that Good Guy can carry objects levitated within a ball of light he generates. For those who came in late, Brelvis has a merged consciousness and while the Brian aspect does […]
Do I need to translate Brelvis? The dogboy talk is getting a bit thick! Anyway, Wombat-man takes a bit longer to go down than some of the others we’ve seen scratched by Thorny Roy… notably Jenna and Lin-Lin during the attack back at Oz Magellan HQ. Wombat-man has a degree of invulnerability, not as much […]
More origin background for the hybrids… as we can see Professor George Lonsdale isn’t a very pleasant dude! Anyway, that’s about it for the exposition for now… things will start to move quickly from here on in. I hope you’re liking the story, please give feedback via the comment section.
One thing that I feel has happened in this chapter is that the story itself has stalled while the fighting took place, in previous chapters the story kept going even during the biffo. That said, the fighting’s out of the way (for now) and the narrative will be taking place at full tilt. The next […]